I'm no expert on this sort of thing, but I thought it was very good.

I added a sentence on explicitly opting in to email notifications under section 1. From what I read I think we may need this in there for legal reasons.
"If you create an account on the Website, you are explicitly authorizing the Forum to send you emails regarding forum activity and updates. You may opt out of most email notifications at any time."

@keith-edmonds OK, I made a page for it here. https://electowiki.org/wiki/Voting_Theory_Forum